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Hi! thanks for reading. I hope you enjoyed the chapters 1-4. Chapter five will come out on the normal two week update schedule. How do you feel about the chapter pictures and the new audio chapters?
What do you think about Loki and Vers (Carol Danvers) as characters so far? Their relationship is going to progress slower than my other story. The dream/vision Vers had is also going to be a big element of the story as well, and tie in heavily to her character development. Did it read like that part of the chapter came out of left field? Please let me know if I need to make any adjustments to that aspect of the story or if it was unclear to read because of the switching of perspectives between Vers and Safira.
thank you very much for supporting me,
Jumpin
