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Hi! What did you think of the new chapter? Any thoughts on why Viktor was so interested in the territory under Harry’s control? How do you feel about he duel?

thanks for reading and supporting me,

Jumpin

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  1. Tiziana Kanouse

    Wow, the development of the backstory was fantastic. The duel and land issue leaves one in suspense. Can’t wait to see where this leads. Still missing the intimacy between the main characters. Terrific use of self-thoughts to move the story forward, but again no direct dialog with emotions expressed between them. The only interaction between them is sex. The intimacy is lacking and makes it hard to buy into “they complete one another.” Maybe all that is needed is a Hermione HUG!

    1. jumpin

      thanks you. the emotional interactions between Hermione, Emma, and Harry are a bit of a challenge to work in considering all the additional characters I’ve added as the story expanded. I’m hoping to bring some of that back over the next few chapters.

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